Initial Audience Feedback

Initial Audience Feedback

I discussed my Initial shots in class with my classmates using a projector, We looked at the improvements that could have been made. I got some feedback on how to improve my composition and focus on using Mise En Scene within my shots.

When looking through my photographs I wanted to look at all the negative points so i could work on improving them next time. The rule of thirds also helped me to focus on improving my composition.

Here is a draft shot:

The shot does have positives but there are some negatives e.g. you can see outside and its raining also there is a bottle of coca cola on the table which should have been moved but i didnt realise at the time (this helps though because it will allow me to see my improvement over time).